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Del's avatar

You create such presence. At a private and crucial point in your story, it feels as if I the reader am guiltily in the room with them. And feeling with them.

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<Mary L. Tabor>'s avatar

That means so much for a writer!

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Susie Mawhinney's avatar

“We’re like the sea, Isaac. If all the angels wept into the sea, nothing could live in the sorrow.”

Oh Mary, could a line hold any more promise...?

This chapter, as Kimberly says, was glorious! 💞

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<Mary L. Tabor>'s avatar

Oh, Susie, promise, indeed, I believe you’ve nailed my intention.

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Susie Mawhinney's avatar

If so I wait breathlessly for the rest…

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Kimberly Warner's avatar

Without trying to be punny, I do believe this chapter might be your novel’s glorious climax?😉

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<Mary L. Tabor>'s avatar

More to come--for those who hang in there with me ... xx

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