Lovely writing! I'm still waiting for the connections between the different elements to come together in my mind. The beautiful images by Andy Duback add a lot to the beautiful, distant tone of this.
"This little troupe of bachelors waiting for their own harem, but they’re submissive to the top dog:" I think we may have seen this sometimes in politics? But I can't put my finger on where.
This, and the chapter 18 https://marytabor.substack.com/p/something-old-for-something-new-chapter I've just read in the early hours of my day, and I'm moved by the essence of them. I want to fight for you, to shout at those men, to tell them to fuck off and celebrate the beauty of woman that is you.
Josh beat me to it. That was WCW's unpublished sequel: The Lover's Lament in Syllogism. But listen, I'd need therapy too if my name was WAR EMBLEM and everyone was in my business like that.
Lovely writing! I'm still waiting for the connections between the different elements to come together in my mind. The beautiful images by Andy Duback add a lot to the beautiful, distant tone of this.
"This little troupe of bachelors waiting for their own harem, but they’re submissive to the top dog:" I think we may have seen this sometimes in politics? But I can't put my finger on where.
Hoping for a stumble forward and out of the gate.
This, and the chapter 18 https://marytabor.substack.com/p/something-old-for-something-new-chapter I've just read in the early hours of my day, and I'm moved by the essence of them. I want to fight for you, to shout at those men, to tell them to fuck off and celebrate the beauty of woman that is you.
Josh beat me to it. That was WCW's unpublished sequel: The Lover's Lament in Syllogism. But listen, I'd need therapy too if my name was WAR EMBLEM and everyone was in my business like that.
Love the syllogisms at the end. Perfect example of how to let the essay finish in the reader!